This model text is a diary from Edmund Hillary's perspective. It retells the events of the historical moment he reached the summit of Mount Everest. It has been written to meet the Year 5 expected standard and comes with a handy annotated version detailing the text-type specific features (red), grammar (green), punctuation (purple) and spelling (blue) teaching opportunities should you wish to use this text with your learners.

National curriculum objectives:
Year 5: Pupils should be taught to identify the audience and purpose of the writing, selecting the appropriate form, and using other similar writing as models for their own.Level of this pack:
Age: 9–10
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