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NEW! Year 6 Model Text – Narrative

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Herons Moor Academy
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Hi, I’d really love to use this model text soon with my class, but on reading it through, I’ve spotted some mistakes (I think). Could they be corrected please? 1) Second para, second sentence, you need a colon or dash betw ‘wrong’ and ‘it’. 2) 4th para beginning ‘It was almost…’, it should be ‘his team’s goals’ with an apostrophe. 3) Second page, second para, second sentence ‘Just as….’ needs a comma after ‘over to him,’ to separate clauses.
Sorry to be picky! Many thanks, Teresa.

Mitch

We’ll get this fixed and reuploaded.

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